Hi, first of all, I would like to inform you that there are errors in the provided sample too. Few examples:
धन्यवाद यहां चारों ओर परंपरा के बारे में है। (धन्यवाद देने का त्योहार यहाँ की परंपरा हैं) ।
सु और बीक मेरे घर से बना पाई प्यार करता हैं । (स्यू और ब्रिक को मेरे द्वारा घर पर बनाई गई पाई बहुत पसंद हैं) ।
As per my view, the sentences in brackets are correct/convey appropriate meaning.
I can do the translation with 99.9% accuracy if you can wait till I complete the present job at hand (at least till this month end and are ready to pay @30 paise/word, which is my present rate.
I am a retired person having very good knowledge of English, Hindi and Marathi languages. Till date, I have completed the translation of one book from Marathi to the Hindi language, another one from Marathi to the English language and at present am translating the third book from English to the Hindi Language, besides other freelancer jobs.
Thanks and have a good day.