Hi there,
Sounds like a fantastic spot with quite the potential. I am a creative director and producer, but also do enjoy writing scripts when the project calls for it.
From your description, this is sounding somewhat tranquil in pace, spiritual, meditative. I don't know if this is supposed to be 1st person monologue, so I wrote as though the VO is talking at you. This can be changed. How about something in this direction to start (and no, not quite :30 - :40 yet):
<MALE CHARACTER puts on headphones>
VO: ..and there. The world around you? Still yours. It's noise? Drowned out...
<MALE CHARACTER seems to be consuming energy around him>
VO: ...and you are still breathing.
<MALE CHARACTER taking in energy, transforming>
VO: Tune in and transform. With Bose, it's not your playlist. It's your experience.
<MALE CHARACTER continues to breathe>
VO: Bose. Your world. Your reality. Your experience.
Thanks,
Shannon