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I implemented the changes. Is that enough or you want some serious revision of the text?
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Konkurrenceafholder - 10 år siden
Its hard to say. On one hand you have the best entry so far. On the other I think you can do better. Perhaps try entering another entry. I would start with your bullet point 3 "My best friend always makes me laugh". Then perhaps tell an anecdote as to why, or a time when you reached out to them, or them to you, and how it made you feel happier.
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