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Edit story on wiki - (not grammar only style) - 'Dokuwiki'

I need someone to edit a science fiction story on a wikipage. By edit I simply mean adding space between the lines in the right places.

Basically I just need you to structure the sentences so they look something like this:

********************** EXAMPLE *********************************

The very instant the hover bike clipped the hilltop, the commander sent his transmission.

Within seconds and with deadly precision the survey robot hovered upward and opened the gun ports. The powerful weapons flickered menacingly and sent a volley of energy bolts toward the humanoid creature.

The nightmarish scenario hit Jill with full force as she raced towards what she thought to be her beloved.

The bike veered from side to side before she managed to bring it to a stop.

She cowered, feeling as if she were watching an unreal scene on one of the entertainment channels.

She thought surely the end had come for her too as the robot swung about. She closed her eyes as tears began building.

Images flickered before her. Her parents, family and friends, their departure, her wedding, Jasper falling lifeless to the ground. The survey robot moving swiftly toward his body and how it hadn't stopped until it had positioned itself straight above him.

Then the images became confusing. The robot changing altitude in order to position itself better for a shot, and then again suddenly hovering menacingly downward until it nearly touched Jaspers body, all mixed in with the horrid beam that had cut into his body.

Circuits calculated, projected, and extrapolated; there was no movement on the ground. The creature seemed neutralized.

A port had opened and a sampling device was being prepared.

The seeker had been about to retrieve a sample from the dead body when it’s sensors had picked up on the hover bike.

The guns were fully charged but before the weapons could send a deadly volley against the incoming vehicle and rider, the survey robot was disintegrated by a powerful heat wave appearing out of the blue, leaving only tiny bits littering the ground.

Jill was thrown clean off the hover bike by the blast wave.

After that an ominous silence fell over the wastelands.

********************** EXAMPLE ENDS *********************************

At the moment the text is crammed up like this.

********************** EXAMPLE 2 *********************************

“The field will be collapsing in a few,” Thorgeir said. “Good,” Kraft answered, thinking about fastening his seat belt; reentry could sometimes be rough. He did, however, decide to go get himself an espresso. He had managed to get the dispenser up and running; caffeine was needed and caffeine superseded everything else. “Only we might have a problem,” Thorgeir said hesitantly. Kraft looked at Thorgeir suspiciously. “Oh? What kind of problem?” “It's the piggyback system,” Thorgeir said slowly. “What about it?” Kraft was getting anxious; he did not need problems, not now. “Oh, no worries, you will be able to launch but so will… your pal.” “Fuck!” Kraft exclaimed bitterly. “What went wrong?” “Well, someone must have discovered there was a 'problem' with the claws and 'fixed it,' so I had to sabotage the entire docking bay system.” Kraft tapped his chin thoughtfully. “That could present a problem, yes… but let's worry about one thing at a time.” Thorgeir smiled. Funny how some humans had a problem focusing on multiple factors at one time, though he suspected Kraft was only making time killing conversation. As it turned out, Thorgeir's worries were right on the mark. As soon as the field around the long hauler dissipated the shuttle with the Vexan launched. Hails went out almost instantly. Then a voice came through on the com; apparently the crew had noticed Kraft also had his engines powered up. “Shuttle XC-56A, you have not been cleared to launch. Power down and remain in bay quarantine, repeat power down immediately.”

********************** EXAMPLE 2 ENDS *********************************

Færdigheder: Virtuel Assistent

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Stickwithit

Hi, I\'m a British guy with some time on his hands in the Philippines. I love Sci-fi, I love reading and have an eye for detail. I\'ve put down it\'ll take a day but it depends on the length of the text! It wi Mere

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Uthe2009

Hello, I have previous experiences and available to work on your wikipage project.

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avni74

Ready to start now. please check pmb.

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Hello Sir/Madam. I am very much interested to do this project. I have experience in this and I am hardworking. I can do a trial before you hire me. I can deliver you with results on time. I hope that you will consi Mere

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Tawfiqueahmed

Sir, i can do the job perfectly. Thanks

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bruges

Please check your PM.

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NaumanShafique

Dear Einar Petersen, I am writing to inform you that I have read you job description and I am confident to say I can fulfill you job requirements. I also have experience because I have already edited my regular assig Mere

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Llouis2

Quality guaranteed.

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