Edit, proof-read &, to a lesser extend, verify any possible improvement to phrases. This is a 4 page, 2,270 word sales copy for a ladies related beauty service. The 2nd piece is just a short version of the same sales letter (almost same paragraphs & wording), 2 pages, 1,142 words. The copy is an easy read, conversational style without much complicated terms overall. Any previous experience editing Sales Copy is preferred but not necessary.
2) Deliverables must be in ready-to-run condition, as follows (depending on the nature of the deliverables):
a) For web sites or other server-side deliverables intended to only ever exist in one place in the Buyer's environment--Deliverables must be installed by the Seller in ready-to-run condition in the Buyer's environment.
b) For all others including desktop software or software the buyer intends to distribute: A software installation package that will install the software in ready-to-run condition on the platform(s) specified in this bid request.
Edited Word Document indicating changes made + Edited final Word Document (i.e. 2 documents, 1 with comments)