I am trying to write a paper on faculty development in academic surgery. I have the paper written, but it sounds more like a talk. I need to make the paper more formal and professional. It will need some good English editing to get rid of colloquialism. The focus of the paper is mainly to attract individuals to go into academic surgery (vs. private practice). And instead of focusing on the negatives of the field, such as income and limitations and family time, I want to mainly focus on the positives of the field.