English revision os a text of fiction with about 6,000 words. Sample: "I'm tired of unrealistic erotic stories" he said, sipping his whiskey. "In most of them both the characters as the situations created are unbelievable. Why writers can't imagine that not all readers are mentally handicapped?"
He was a very respectable gentleman well advanced in his fifties and a businessman in the publishing industry and we were having a drink in a late afternoon with no other aim than keeping a conversation about one of my textbooks which has long I was trying to publish by his publishing house. Our friendship has emerged due to our professional contacts and the subject of erotic texts arose because his company was producing a collection of erotic tales and he was bothered by the low quality of the writings that were being submitted to them.
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I am itching to correct this. As soon as I started reading I found grammatical errors as well as the sentences are way too long. I can revise this for you and leave it error free.