The client has requested editing the content (manuscript) to strengthen the impact of the story.
About the plot ... It's supposed to be a love story according to the author, but I do not know who the lovers are after two careful reads! One pair of lovers is introduced early in the story, but they disappear midway and do not return. Other characters die, and the surviving pair at the end are a woman and her niece. They seem to live together, but they are hardly likely to be lovers. A man (unnamed) is also mentioned by the woman at the end, but that is just a tantalizing clue.
The ideology of the story gets in the way of enjoying the story. Although the point may be a valid one it needs to be presented with more subtlety. The theme is that religious and political leaders, who have formed a nexus, are exploiting the masses. (this first story as is is about 30 pages)
Can you tackle a rewrite of this story?
You must provide proof of your experience as a ghostwriter and of your writing abilities. No place holder bids will be considered.