I'm starting an online website that helps aspiring baseball players be successful with hitting. My marketing system is going to have multiple offers
The first two offers are going to be a blog and an article. I've already written both of them. I'm looking for somebody to edit, enhance and make them as persuasive/intriguing as possible.
Each article needs to encompass the following traits as much as possible.
1. Intriguing positioning statement
2. Immediate attention grabber
3. Frequent attention reset points
4. Interesting headings
5. Relatable problem
6. Uniquely positioned solution
7. Exiting mission
8. Foreshadow your next offer
Again I feel content with most of what I've already written but I want somebody to enhance it a little [url removed, login to view] should be a very quick job but I have other bigger projects in the near future. I would preferably like somebody with a little experience with baseball.
Here is a link to my blog
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