Hello, I would like you to write a final crowd source campaign description based on the information you already have, and in part your contest entry, and one or two more documents I will supply. I liked your contest entry but I doubt it is the best we can do considering that it was contest that you didn't know if you were getting paid for it or not and you had little feedback and no opportunity to modify it. I think we can come up with something much better and much stronger if we work together.
So with that said I am willing to pay you another $50 if you can guarantee my satisfaction.
Please take a look at example #16 to get an idea as to what direction I think we should go. But I need your input and in fact you will be a much better guide as to what we should do because it will be friends and strangers that will be reading it and being or not being affected by it, not me.
If tears are not coming out of your eyes when you read it it isn’t strong enough.
I cry all the time when I write this stuff because it is all true and I know every detail but will readers feel it or just write it off as just another suffering family on the planet.
One thing to note that I don’t know if I have emphasized elsewhere is the fact that I am 54 and my son is 7 years old. This of course means that even in best case scenarios I probably won’t be around to see his 18th birthday, and right now I have my doubts that I will be around for his 8th birth or even past next month.
This is why I was working so hard and so much, because I was trying to build up a business and a savings so that my wife and child had something running and would have an income and savings when I go. Now these very important years of my child’s life every second that I can find energy is spent trying to start a business or website instead of spending quality time with my child.
So let me know if you think you can do this job asap and we will get started.
I am going to send you a couple of pictures for inspiration as well.