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Sentry Medical - Artworks & Mockups

Hi, here´s my artwork. For the packaging of instant ice I wanted to show the water in motion and freezing, presenting the nature of the product with an appealing aesthetic. For the non woven paper I present a clean, simple design but still very close to the nature of the product, Hope you like it!

Konkurrenceindlæg #21 for                                                 2 x ARTWORK PACKAGING (INSTANT ICE PACK & NON-WOVEN PAPER TAPE)

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  • SentryMedical
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 10 år siden

    Hi there,

    Firstly, thank you for participating in this contest. I am liking both designs and appreciate how you explained your artworks. I like the effect of the wave and it crystallizing into ice. However, i'm not sure if my manager will be on the same boat as us. He made either think it is creative or totally irrelvant as what an instant ice pack is. I will show him the design to get some feed back to help you improve you designs. Just a tip, if you type instant ice pack into google images, there will be several existing packaging from our competitors just to give you an idea. So may be try to put a graphic image of a body part like an arm or leg with an ice pack, as it shows the purpose of the product.

    I like the simplicity of the non-woven paper tape packaging, however again it may be a bit too simple in his eyes. I'm not sure if that colour used is following our brand guide lines of the blue.

    I will get back to you soon.

    Thank you.

    • 10 år siden
    1. Rocamora
      Rocamora
      • 10 år siden

      Thanks for your comments,

      I'm so glad you have liked the designs. Actually we had already seen the designs of your competition and that's why we hastle break that style so marked. We focus on a design that evokes the product and that is really appealing to the eye, giving the sensation of speed and cold at the same time.

      I'm going to change some things to make the arts according to their needs, but I would like you to think about the above.

      As for the design of nonwoven attempt to link the design to the simplicity of the product, but we can apply some changes to make it more striking and consistent with your corporate colors.

      I'm aware of your feedback.

      • 10 år siden