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The Fall of Templar

This is about the fall of the Knights Templar, and it follows a young boy, Thomas, who was entrusted with a dangerous secret.

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  • RhapsodeMonolith
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 3 måneder siden

    Hello.
    Thank you for your entry.
    It has good parts, but it's insufficient. Sorry.

    • 3 måneder siden
    1. chaotictheory
      chaotictheory
      • 3 måneder siden

      Thank you for your feedback! If its possible, could you let me know what was insufficient so I can improve in the future? Thanks in advance!

      • 3 måneder siden