Freelancer: farlajbj2
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Demise of the last knights

Greetings. This is my first entry for your contest. Despite a few last minute changes, I tried matching the story to your requirement. I hope you may be satisfied with my work.

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  • RhapsodeMonolith
    • 3 måneder siden

    Thank you for your entry.
    It good written, but it's insufficient. Sorry.

    • 3 måneder siden
    1. farlajbj2
      • 3 måneder siden

      Greetings, Thank you for your response. If I may, could you please give me a few pointers indicating where I can improve (for reference, as well as for future contests)

      • 3 måneder siden