Rewrite/rephrase the "about us" section for our website

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  • Vinder: OptiJarrad

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We want our "about us" section rewritten to sound more casual, fun, and welcoming.

Our current "about us" can be found here:
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“Such unique work. ”

Profilbillede pawaholic, United States.

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  • gormsby49
    gormsby49
    • 1 måned siden

    As I was viewing your website there should be some pictures of the pocket punches along with some pictures of Miss Lola and Twiggy. Pictures of what a membership contains are nice too. I know you just started your business and building a website takes a little time there are some suggestions

    • 1 måned siden
  • pawaholic
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 1 måned siden

    Thank you all for your submissions. I have picked Jarrad's as the winner. I loved that Twiggy and Lola were the main focus.

    • 1 måned siden
    1. whetstoneedits
      whetstoneedits
      • 1 måned siden

      It was definitely a unique and out-of-the-box submission. Thanks.

      -Whetstone

      • 1 måned siden
  • gerardmcshane
    gerardmcshane
    • 1 måned siden

    I would really like to know more about your business. What's fun? What's cozy. Your website does not seem to give enough info on what you are about and why the passion for hedgehogs. I sounds like a beautiful enterprise. But what actually gives you passion? I feel I would need to know that for my submission to be authentic.

    • 1 måned siden
  • whetstoneedits
    whetstoneedits
    • 1 måned siden

    Hi.

    Please consider upgrading the contest with an #increaseprize to at least double the current prize. Freelancer deducts fees and taxes on our end, which drastically reduces the prize. (The freelancer contest fee is 10% or $5.00 USD, whichever is greater.)

    Thank you.

    -Whetstone

    • 1 måned siden
    1. pawaholic
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 1 måned siden

      Hi Adive! Thank you for the suggestion, I did not know that free-lancer takes so much of a cut.

      • 1 måned siden
  • gormsby49
    gormsby49
    • 1 måned siden

    how long have you been in business?

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    1. pawaholic
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 1 måned siden

      Gail, we just launched in January.

      • 1 måned siden

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