Professional company Bio and story needs writing.

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Præmier: $50
Modtagne indlæg: 26
Vinder: GavinParish

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We are a new company and I have just had a go at writing a bio for our website and possibly to be used in some local newspapers. I'm not a professional writer and would like help with making our bio shine.I have attached the bio, it is in Australian English, please submit all entries in Australian English. This is the first of many articles and we would like to find a winner to write for us into the future.

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vanuatuboy, Australia.

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ssethumadhavan
- 9 år siden
I think I just missed the deadline by a minute can I send the entry
- 9 år siden
ssethumadhavan
- 9 år siden
@vantuaboy could you please provide me one message that your readers should carry forward after reading this article, I am planning to submit an article hence if you can do that it would be great for both of us. Else I will take the last paragraph of your article as the one, which I have noted for reference. "Aquamarine Personalised Home Care is committed to providing the highest quality non-medical home care services and treating all clients, of all ages with dignity and respect.
- 9 år siden
ssethumadhavan
- 9 år siden
@Vanuatabosy, Could you please describe the relationship between Brian Farrel and Barry Holland. Are Brian and Barry completely un related? Could you let me know if Brian's Grand parents and Barry's father are connected.
- 9 år siden
writersquality
- 9 år siden
@vanuatuboy: Dear Sir. Please have a look at entry #28 . This is my third entry to contest. Hope this time I did it the way you asked. Please give valuable feedback.
- 9 år siden
mynk16
- 9 år siden
@vanuatuboy

Read out the Messages section of #24 . It's very important.

- Mayank
- 9 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 9 år siden
similar length, yes improve vocab, organised as you see best
- 9 år siden
smshah
- 9 år siden
Can you please specify exactly the requirements ?
Should the length be the same as the sample or less?
Should the vocabulary be improved? Should it be more formal or inclined towards informal language?
Should the article be organised more or the same structure be used?
- 9 år siden
vampyfree
- 9 år siden
Hello vanuatuboy, i hope you can read in image submitted..or else i will send word file. :)
- 9 år siden
writersquality
- 9 år siden
I'll submit my entry very soon.
- 9 år siden
TheGuyver2040
- 9 år siden
Vanuatuboy,

Would it be possible for you to guarantee payment?
- 9 år siden
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1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 9 år siden
  Thank you
  - 9 år siden
2. TheGuyver2040
  - 9 år siden
  Done. See entries #2 and #3 .
  - 9 år siden
Reejurekh
- 9 år siden
Can you please guarantee the contest?
- 9 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 9 år siden
  I just guaranteed it now, apologies I'm new to this.
  - 9 år siden
shashankroy
- 9 år siden
I can do this . Please contact me
- 9 år siden