Tried to fit as much info as possible, used Open sans and Shadows into light font. I have the rights to use the music. The phone 3d model used is an android phone instead on an iphone. The length of the video is 1 minute. added all your points you mentioned in your post. I have tried to make it as "High impact" as possible. The final video will be in 1080p, here are some pics of the video in 1080p HD http://imgur.com/a/m7jXA (right click->view image) to see them at 1080p.