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  This is full feedback, you can make some changes if you wish to the content and message me later.

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     I do really appreciate your feedback & ratings. As I have already mentioned, these articles were written by one of the expert writers from my team; but, to be honest I hadn't read the articles & just posted them as they were.
     In other related contests, I do always mention about the quality writing before submitting. I haven't mentioned this into your contest because I submitted them just "as an entry" to get your response. You might have noticed that on the Public Clarification Board I wrote something about copytyping. You can consider that as a main reason for these entries. I know about the quality writing & it will be delivered to you at the best time. Be assured of it as I am very much interested in your contest !
     
     For the next entry, I will ask my writer to make necessary revisions & this time I will submit them after my own reading & editing.
     
     Best Regards,
     Mayank

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  Interior design, I wont read past "we at ABC company"... this is not how you sell... this blog we are running is neutral... it only refers to partners and colleagues who are doing a good job...
  
  Ill give you an example, this one is in formal;
  
  Roman architecture is awesome..... back in the 13th century they..... and that is why its called "The citadel". Talking about citadels, if you have not heard of these guys, well start hearing www.linkofwebsite.com , they do exact replicas of the roman architecutre... bla bla... they are so good... they are this.... they are that.... back to the roman architecture, that is why Julius Ceaser said "veni vidi vici".

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     You are 100% correct. Effective selling articles communicates with the audience & their needs. I knew about it & hence I mentioned that in the description. You will get better in my next submission !

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  on the last one Stop guest blogging, good you mentioned Matt (an example) but Matt asked us to write about him, so we add "if you want to know more about 'financial bubbles' follow Matt at (link) or facebook, etc..

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     I don't think it's necessary to write this line (even at the end) until & unless we want to promoting Matt's social profile. But yes, the designation of Matt Cutts should have been mentioned in the article in order to give it a right flow.

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  walking in their footsteps. Great Leaders
  
  I think you wrote this one off the top of your head, your perception. The point is not your perception, but the perception of influencial entities (spokes people, presidents, multinational companies. warren buffet, bill gates, steve jobs)... more examples...

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     I will ask my writer to provide me the sources... will get it changed or will write by myself for good :)

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  • 9 år siden

  About economics:
  you didn't sell anything... maybe its because I study economics and business that it seems too broad. You are giving an idea without an example, so the person when reading starts to understand but then loses you because there is no continuation.
  suggestion would be to add a world case scenario, and right in particular about some companies? about individuals? with power, or in power?
  
  more examples!))

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     The marketing articles are directed towards professionalism & not towards selling. I understand that for selling a product, it should have been written in a communicating way. I was just waiting for your feedback so that I would get it changed by my writer or will change it by myself. Thanks for your suggestion !

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     mynk16

     • 9 år siden

     Economics related article was just a general one. I think you missed out Social Media one, which was directed towards marketing.... and yes, I must mention again that the marketing articles which my writer wrote are not directed towards selling. I will get it changed to a better, communicating, real marketing one !

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  Your writing is great, but there is alot of work. Don't get me wrong, and take it as good criticism.

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