Child Paying Adult

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  • Vinder: raycboston

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Want a drawing of a very unhappy child paying a very happy adult some money, with a plane in the background.

Background: It's cheaper for airlines to transport children (lighter) than adults (heavier), as there are less fuel costs involved in transporting lighter people, yet the price is the same, so children are effectively cross-subsidising adults.

I want to illustrate this with a drawing, which will be published on [url removed, login to view] (our website)

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  • loliria
    loliria
    • 4 år siden

    Good day Mr. Capetownrob, sir. I would highly appreciate it if you could comment, critique, and rate on my entry #21. Please and thank you sir. :)

    • 4 år siden
  • JTGDesign
    JTGDesign
    • 4 år siden

    Please comment and rate #20 - thank you. www.JTGDesign.com

    • 4 år siden
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 år siden

    hi,
    please check out entry #17

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      Love it, thanks!

      • 4 år siden
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 år siden

    thanks for comment, plz check #19 hope you like it (not 18). regards

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      I LOVE the way you've stuffed the suitcase full of money! Also, I prefer the style of the plane to #17. BUT #17 has a better looking adult. The mouth of the adult in #17 looks a bit weird.

      • 4 år siden
  • nilankohalder
    nilankohalder
    • 4 år siden

    The biggest concern is that - none of these are any freelancer's creation. Just ready made vectors put together.

    • 4 år siden
    1. alienatics
      alienatics
      • 4 år siden

      I have the whole project starting from my pencil sketch to final shadings in different layers....so little thinking before spamming may help you in future.

      • 4 år siden
    2. alienatics
      alienatics
      • 4 år siden

      and there are plenty of free to use items available,they are made to help your creation,but if you have nothing of your own there then its different.

      • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    #16 and #14 are my joint favourites. What I prefer about #14 is that the express on the adult's face comes through larger (as he's got a larger face) and fiercer. #16 has a slightly clearer expression of sadness on the child's face.

    • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    #14 - please place on a white background, not grey

    • 4 år siden
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 år siden

    thanks, check my new entry #12

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      feedback above

      • 4 år siden
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 år siden

    hi,
    please checkout entry #11
    regards

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      I like the addition of the suitcase, but not the airport buildings in the background...they're an odd shape and drown out the message.

      • 4 år siden
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 år siden

    sir, in 12 the adult seem greedy but the others seem angry or happy. so hope you like most #12

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      #12 The money is too small, the airport buildings are a weird shape. In terms of the expression of the adult, I agree, I like that aspect the 2nd most after #3

      • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    #13 I quite like! It's the most interesting angle of the plane so far, and includes the airport buildings in the best way so far (ie small). There are 2 ways it can be improved: (a) get an evil grin like #11, and (b) there's not enough contrast in the colours of the people and the background.

    • 4 år siden
  • ruralboy
    ruralboy
    • 4 år siden

    plz check #10

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      Love it man, especially the suitcase. BUT in #3 it's clearer that the money is being paid by the child to the man - in yours it's not 100% clear who is paying who, as they both hold cash.

      • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    I like the airport behind #8, but the people don't have as much prominence as #3

    • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    #9 Doesn't have as much weight difference between the 2 as #3, and the adult doesn't have as evil a grin

    • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    #6 What I like about it is that it's clearer that the kid is unhappy than it is in #3. BUT I don't like the blue shading around the plane, and the adult doesn't come across as large as in #3, and doesn't have as evil a grin - so I still prefer #3.

    • 4 år siden
  • ganadev
    ganadev
    • 4 år siden

    do you mind adding a new character into the picture to give a better implementation of the idea

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      I'd be interested to see what you have in mind

      • 4 år siden
  • raycboston
    raycboston
    • 4 år siden

    please check entry #3.
    regards

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      Replied to #4 below.

      • 4 år siden
    2. raycboston
      raycboston
      • 4 år siden

      Hi capetownrob,
      I'm glad that you liked my entry.
      Thanks.
      Best Regards

      • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    It's important to have the adult look much bigger, to emphasise the weight difference (an idea is to place them onto a seesaw like scale, to emphasise the weight difference)

    • 4 år siden
  • brandonLee24
    brandonLee24
    • 4 år siden

    Please feedback on #4

    • 4 år siden
    1. capetownrob
      Konkurrencevært
      • 4 år siden

      I like #4, it's my 2nd favourite after #3. A few things: (1) the buildings in the background are unnecessary noise. (2) I'd prefer a fatter adult, (3) I'd prefer a bigger plane

      • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    The adult should be an adult passenger, shouldn't be wearing a pilot's hat.

    • 4 år siden
  • capetownrob
    Konkurrencevært
    • 4 år siden

    Epidemiological - I can't see that that's a child

    • 4 år siden

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