Child Paying Adult

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Vinder: raycboston

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Want a drawing of a very unhappy child paying a very happy adult some money, with a plane in the background.

Background: It's cheaper for airlines to transport children (lighter) than adults (heavier), as there are less fuel costs involved in transporting lighter people, yet the price is the same, so children are effectively cross-subsidising adults.

I want to illustrate this with a drawing, which will be published on www.southafrica.to (our website)

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loliria
- 12 år siden
Good day Mr. Capetownrob, sir. I would highly appreciate it if you could comment, critique, and rate on my entry #21 . Please and thank you sir. :)
- 12 år siden
JTGDesign
- 12 år siden
Please comment and rate #20 - thank you. www.JTGDesign.com
- 12 år siden
raycboston
- 12 år siden
hi,
please check out entry #17
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  Love it, thanks!
  - 12 år siden
ruralboy
- 12 år siden
thanks for comment, plz check #19 hope you like it (not 18). regards
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  I LOVE the way you've stuffed the suitcase full of money! Also, I prefer the style of the plane to #17 . BUT #17 has a better looking adult. The mouth of the adult in #17 looks a bit weird.
  - 12 år siden
nilankohalder
- 12 år siden
The biggest concern is that - none of these are any freelancer's creation. Just ready made vectors put together.
- 12 år siden
1. alienatics
  - 12 år siden
  I have the whole project starting from my pencil sketch to final shadings in different layers....so little thinking before spamming may help you in future.
  - 12 år siden
2. alienatics
  - 12 år siden
  and there are plenty of free to use items available,they are made to help your creation,but if you have nothing of your own there then its different.
  - 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
#16 and #14 are my joint favourites. What I prefer about #14 is that the express on the adult's face comes through larger (as he's got a larger face) and fiercer. #16 has a slightly clearer expression of sadness on the child's face.
- 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
#14 - please place on a white background, not grey
- 12 år siden
ruralboy
- 12 år siden
thanks, check my new entry #12
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  feedback above
  - 12 år siden
raycboston
- 12 år siden
hi,
please checkout entry #11
regards
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  I like the addition of the suitcase, but not the airport buildings in the background...they're an odd shape and drown out the message.
  - 12 år siden
ruralboy
- 12 år siden
sir, in 12 the adult seem greedy but the others seem angry or happy. so hope you like most #12
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  #12 The money is too small, the airport buildings are a weird shape. In terms of the expression of the adult, I agree, I like that aspect the 2nd most after #3
  - 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
#13 I quite like! It's the most interesting angle of the plane so far, and includes the airport buildings in the best way so far (ie small). There are 2 ways it can be improved: (a) get an evil grin like #11 , and (b) there's not enough contrast in the colours of the people and the background.
- 12 år siden
ruralboy
- 12 år siden
plz check #10
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  Love it man, especially the suitcase. BUT in #3 it's clearer that the money is being paid by the child to the man - in yours it's not 100% clear who is paying who, as they both hold cash.
  - 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
I like the airport behind #8 , but the people don't have as much prominence as #3
- 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
#9 Doesn't have as much weight difference between the 2 as #3 , and the adult doesn't have as evil a grin
- 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
#6 What I like about it is that it's clearer that the kid is unhappy than it is in #3 . BUT I don't like the blue shading around the plane, and the adult doesn't come across as large as in #3 , and doesn't have as evil a grin - so I still prefer #3 .
- 12 år siden
ganadev
- 12 år siden
do you mind adding a new character into the picture to give a better implementation of the idea
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  I'd be interested to see what you have in mind
  - 12 år siden
raycboston
- 12 år siden
please check entry #3 .
regards
- 12 år siden
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1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  Replied to #4 below.
  - 12 år siden
2. raycboston
  - 12 år siden
  Hi capetownrob,
  I'm glad that you liked my entry.
  Thanks.
  Best Regards
  - 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
It's important to have the adult look much bigger, to emphasise the weight difference (an idea is to place them onto a seesaw like scale, to emphasise the weight difference)
- 12 år siden
brandonLee24
- 12 år siden
Please feedback on #4
- 12 år siden
1. Konkurrenceafholder
  - 12 år siden
  I like #4 , it's my 2nd favourite after #3 . A few things: (1) the buildings in the background are unnecessary noise. (2) I'd prefer a fatter adult, (3) I'd prefer a bigger plane
  - 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
The adult should be an adult passenger, shouldn't be wearing a pilot's hat.
- 12 år siden
Konkurrenceafholder
- 12 år siden
Epidemiological - I can't see that that's a child
- 12 år siden