Banner Ad Design for Shopfront - Lightbox Banner Design

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Banner Ad Design for Shopfront - Lightbox Banner Design

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  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    stil now winner?

    • 6 år siden
    1. Anmech
      Anmech
      • 6 år siden

      it's been 6 days already

      • 6 år siden
  • Anmech
    Anmech
    • 6 år siden

    have a look at #61 included the mock up

    • 6 år siden
    1. logicstate
      Konkurrencevært
      • 6 år siden

      It does look good thanks !

      • 6 år siden
    2. Anmech
      Anmech
      • 6 år siden

      thanks

      • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    #52 wow thanks for that - looks cool how you've done that to the real shopfront :-)

    Thanks to all the designs so far everyone it is looking great. Its tough but we are getting there. Can't wait to pick a designer!!

    • 6 år siden
    1. logicstate
      Konkurrencevært
      • 6 år siden

      #58 this border is horrible lol sorry...

      • 6 år siden
    2. ykumar85
      ykumar85
      • 6 år siden

      i think #56 and #57 is nice.

      • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    please check #60. note that this is only a sample photo of a store in a street so you can picture how will it look like if installed already. if you have any revisions, let me know. thanks. :)

    • 6 år siden
  • ykumar85
    ykumar85
    • 6 år siden

    somebody is copying my idea

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi logislate! please see #53, address on top banner is white and bigger. viet translations bigger. layout more classy, simple and straight to the point. thanks.

    • 6 år siden
  • ykumar85
    ykumar85
    • 6 år siden

    my entry 51 will look like this #52

    • 6 år siden
  • ykumar85
    ykumar85
    • 6 år siden

    pls see #50 and #51.

    • 6 år siden
  • ykumar85
    ykumar85
    • 6 år siden

    Please give me your valuable feedback on my entries #39, #40, #41, #42, #43, #44, #45, #46, #47

    • 6 år siden
    1. logicstate
      Konkurrencevært
      • 6 år siden

      ykumar85: #39 - the arrows look funny! makes it look very cluttered. I am liking everything else in terms of spacing, font, not sure about the border. The border does fit but not sure on that design.

      • 6 år siden
    2. ykumar85
      ykumar85
      • 6 år siden

      pls see #50, this is revised.

      • 6 år siden
  • jhharoon
    jhharoon
    • 6 år siden

    your feedback is require.

    • 6 år siden
    1. logicstate
      Konkurrencevært
      • 6 år siden

      jhharoon: What are the difference with all your submissions? Please let me know cause it all looks the same. Not really a fan of the gradient colours in the font, I think that won't turn out nicely on print.

      • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi logislate! please check #28. a revised version of #20 and #21. i used a lighter shade of gold for the text and the english and viet translations' spacing was changed so that it'll be read easily. i also made #24 and #25 with a border and background though i suggest to use a simpler and cleaner layout like #28.

    • 6 år siden
    1. logicstate
      Konkurrencevært
      • 6 år siden

      Thank you

      • 6 år siden
  • ykumar85
    ykumar85
    • 6 år siden

    Please give me your valuable feedback on my entries #34, #35, #36, #37

    • 6 år siden
  • hmwijaya
    hmwijaya
    • 6 år siden

    Hi logicstate, I am wondering what is the exact measurement for the top light box? Seems like everyone here submitting different size for the top light box (some wider than other). If it's really 5000mm x 60mm then the top light box should be much much bigger than the side columns...
    Thank you!

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    nDmB: #23, impressive! As much as I love the angelabreyes designs your mockup is attractive due to the following reasons 1) nicer font colour, the gold is good 2) the writing on the columns is easy to read and spread out however design #20 and #21 has the fonts squashed together and makes it look very modern *tough decision!!!* I do like the borders that you've put together but not sure if it will look good printed...

    Note to ALL, the banner on #23 is the most easiest to read and most attractive! Good work!

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi, just a thought, you might want to see a different color. please see #22 :)

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi! i made 3 new studies for you to choose from. i decided to use light color that is between yellow and white since i consider that it's a lightbox. it's better to use light colors contrast to the red background.

    #19 -- i used light yellow for the store name and viet and english translations. with this, i think the light will shine through it better than the gold/dark yellow.

    #20 -- i used light yellow and white. light will definitely pass through it 100%

    #21 -- just like #10 i just made the yellow color more gold-ish. :)

    let me know if you have any other suggestions.

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    angelabreyes: I do like #10 the most so far. Its got a mix of everything (chinese, vietnamese, english, shop name) but doesn't look too cluttered either. Agree that red background would look better. With regards to the yellow text, do you think its too yellow? Although it might turn out good once the fluorescent light shines through it, would you be able to try turn it to a gold/ beige or even white? Would white writing as the dominant text colour be ideal?

    How about the Red, do you think it needs to be any lighter or darker? Just trying to picture it with light shining through it, perhaps a shade or two darker?

    On the top banner, the Hang Seng Herbal Centre still doesn't stand out enough... however not entirely sure what can be done... : /

    kshevitskiy: The measurement for the left column is 2500mm x 410mm and the right column is 2500 x 330mm

    Cheers!

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi! please check #10. this is a revised version of #1. for me, it's ok to use red background instead of white to make it more "catchy" to the eyes of the people passing through the store. I removed the chinese characters on the top banner since it's already present on the right side with the viet. and the english translation on the left side. I think that's better to make it more organize and not to create confusion because of repitition. it's better if we just put the store name and address on the top banner to make it simplier and the people will be focused on it once they saw it.

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    To ALL Designers, can you please make sure you keep in mind that this design will be PRINTED on laminate. So any special effects might look good on computer but might turn out bad on print.

    Thank you

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    angelabreyes: can you please put design #1 and #2 back? They were good... Let me give you guys more feedback tonight!

    • 6 år siden
  • kshevitskiy
    kshevitskiy
    • 6 år siden

    hi logicscate! i made top banner (#9) if you like this and really interested in my work i can make another banners (vertical columns)
    btw, what size of vertical columns should be?
    thank you

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi sir/mam. ive made 5 new studies. i applied your revisions in #4. other choices are #5, #6, #7, and #8. i just want you to have more choices. :)

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    also is it possible to make the top banner more stand out? The writing maybe needs to be bigger? Maybe take away the chinese writing on top? And leave it for the sides only?
    The eyes are not focused on the top banner at the moment.... hope this feedback is welcomed!

    • 6 år siden
    1. angelabreyes
      angelabreyes
      • 6 år siden

      alright. will do something about it. thanks!

      • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
    Konkurrencevært
    • 6 år siden

    angelabreyes: Thanks for the post!! #1 looks great! Please keep it there. I have some suggestions which are
    1) Can you try make the background colours white and the rest red and gold?
    2) The top banner needs to be cleaner so the writing in the corners need to be moved, can they be moved somewhere else?
    3) What other suggestions do you have? Do you need anymore writing?

    With regards to #2, the red dark shadows looks great but I think once printed will look dull and won't turn out nice.

    Open for suggestions everyone!!!

    Thanks

    • 6 år siden
    1. angelabreyes
      angelabreyes
      • 6 år siden

      will send the revised layout asap. thanks for the feedback :)

      • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    hi sir/mam. please see #1 and #2. thanks

    • 6 år siden
  • angelabreyes
    angelabreyes
    • 6 år siden

    will send my entry in a bit!

    • 6 år siden
  • logicstate
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    • 6 år siden

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