I do like your entry and you know what your talking about, but the wording or flow isn't really right, would you be more comfortable writing blog / facebook posts instead of this description as I can give you a shot at that by writing a sample article or facebook posts etc
Woah! Facebook posts and blog posts I can surely do! I'm actually a lead admin on several Facebook fan pages, mainly Pokemon, but I can surely do Zelda! I'd love to help you out with that! If you want I can private message you several of the pages I've posted for and some that I own now! I have even posted on pages that have over a million likes believe it or not.
I didn't save the earlier file, so I retyped it, I think I missed a few points, but if I add them back, or if you think about it like that, it's basically just an addition, I'm sorry I forgot to retype the entire portion of the previous post!