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LoZ Sterling Silver Ring

The piece that I decided to write a description for was the ring of the Triforce, now I copied the sort of style that was going in the example, and I thought why not make that a sort of running gag? Now I'm not 100% that you'll love my description, personally myself I believe I could add and remove things, but that's where the buyer comes in! Thanks for taking the time to look through what I wrote as well!


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  • Greenuki
    Greenuki
    • 5 år siden

    Perhaps you grew up playing The Legend of Zelda on Nintendo religiously.

    Or perhaps you're someone who is looking for the perfect "Geek" item for your guy or gal.

    The Triforce is an artifact that appears all throughout the Zelda series, left by the three godesses of the world.

    The Triforce on your hand as a ring can serve as some great jewelry, some that your geeky friends will show awe at, and of course that's something you can take pride in!

    Though I'm pretty sure some of you already knew it, well partake in yet another journey with the Triforce of Courage, Power, and Wisdom on your hand!

    • 5 år siden
    1. dragontale
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 5 år siden

      Post this as another entry would you, else this will get way too clustered

      • 5 år siden
  • Greenuki
    Greenuki
    • 5 år siden

    Could I get an idea of what you mean for someone who knows the game? Also haha, I thought - https://www.etsy.com/uk/listing/212935214/sterling-silver-legend-of-zelda-triforce?ref=shop_home_active_9 was a ring, now that I've read through it, I see what I did wrong.

    • 5 år siden
    1. dragontale
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 5 år siden

      Haha don't worry about it, I also have rings :)... outside the box I guess haha

      • 5 år siden
  • dragontale
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    also I just noticed you only mentioned the word ring once in the description as 'the ring'

    • 5 år siden
    1. Greenuki
      Greenuki
      • 5 år siden

      I tried a hand in retyping it, I hope you end up liking what I tried to do to fit your specifications, if I've made any more errors, please do message me back!

      • 5 år siden
  • dragontale
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    the start and end are good, but the middle is sort of describing the game to the customer, not the route I really want to go with when my main website is zelda related items :P. You show some good promise and knowledge, but you need to rewrite the middle for someone who knows the game already

    • 5 år siden
  • dragontale
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    Im liking the tone of it... I don't know here you got the ring from as I don't have one on etsy, but not to worry, I have them unreleased :P. as for feedback...

    • 5 år siden
  • dragontale
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    haha I am a fan of this gag :P

    • 5 år siden

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