Offentlig Præciserings Opslagstavle

  • dragontale
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    Thanks for listening to the feedback, I see you added what I said, but its lost quite a bit of its flow, the last paragraph seems a bit dense. The full description of an item isn't needed such as 'Gold Screen printed logo and label and 2 necklaces' as I can just split this up into the 'Package contents section after', but a a general mention. So just Limited Edition Drawstring bag and two necklaces to choose form (Obviously worded better than that, as i'm quite poor at wording things)

    • 5 år siden