Thanks. This is better, but I think the left thumb could use to be less bent. Also, I would like to make it clearer that the hands are having an effect on the muscle. For example, if the left fingers are going to be curled like that, they should be having some effect on the left side of the muscle. Also, overall, I'd say that the convergence of the lines of the muscle should express what the hands are doing to it. For example, look at how the hands are working on the limb in this photo: http://www.beyondbeautycapecod.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/04/massage-envy-image.jpg See how the hand action deforms the skin and muscle. Or: https://horshamchiropractors.files.wordpress.com/2011/08/professional-massage.jpg Also, I understand that you are trying to give the hand some depth by shortening the fingers of the left hand. But because it looks like a shadow, the left hand, to some people, may appear deformed. Thanks for all your effort on this.