Sleeker design with rationale marked in red
Please find included my entry. Due to the length of the email, you can see the images side by side - apologies, this is the best way I could submit my entry but rest assured, it looks fine in word/Mailchimp. I have added in some comments in red areas that I have changed to fit with what I have found to be best practice. Please let me know if you have any questions. Thank you for taking the time to consider my entry.