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Father, Father's Eyebrows and The Little Girls

Hello! I decided to give a shot for this contest. This version is the color comperhensive version. Because this contest is for a bigger project (children book), I make my entry looks like a picture of a book cover. Here, the girls are playing with their father eyebrows while the father smiling happily. The overall mood is bright. Any change or improvement are welcome. Hope you'll like it, and thank you for this big opportunity.


                                                                                                            Konkurrenceindlæg #                                        14
                                     for                                         Illustrate a Children's Book

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  • InTheWorks
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    I like the girls', but the facial expressions seem confusing. One is winking, one looks scared and it's not clear why she's pointing to herself. And I'm not sure about the winking faces on the eyebrows. The dad's eyes and mouth are opened too wide, too. You've definitely captured a happy, playful scene, though. Thanks for your entry!

    • 5 år siden
  • InTheWorks
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 5 år siden

    Thank you for your entry. I like the girls

    • 5 år siden