I like it, we are so close!! Love the additional tribal instead of the wheat, the design is beautiful, love the wing shape, but maybe ONE thing: could i see a version with a little less? I'm afraid the whole new tribal part makes the tattoo too wide .. something in the same style but half that much? 2. I've decided i like the monkeys best without the inside body lines. 3. and maybe a slight bit more on the shadow depth. 4. it was definitely the eyebrows that were throwing me off :) .. like just the eye dot and mouth, tho mouth could be slightly smiling.
Yes, I think the same about new tribal & completely agree with you. It's bulky & style is different from the first one. I fixed it. Please, look.
1. Less tribal on the left.
2. Remove body lines.
4. Deeper shadow.
3. A bit more smile. :)
Sending the link, because can't submit more entries. https://yadi.sk/i/gfTQ8WofdQg7D
(let me know if something wrong with the link)