Hi! I definitely feel like you’re on the right track with this, the layout, eyes, and lettering look excellent! My main concerns are the coloring of the body which looks a little flat? If you could make the lighting on the body and shading look more like my idea it would be great. I also was concerned with the way the head connects on the right. Trying to explain it is difficult, but the right head is supposed to be connected to the loop at the top, not the segment of body on the right. There is a line going across the head that cuts it off a bit strangely. If you could fix that I’d really appreciate it! Thanks!