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  • Lesterp
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    also with the testimonials - can you change them so that they are side by side so it reduces the length of the landing page a bit? and also try and make them a bit more of a design feature while keeping it looking professional. also try and have them coming off the logos of their companys because at the moment you havn't included their companys logo.
    one last thing is the call to action - there needs to be more somehow - maybe further down the page so it encourages the audience to get in touch with us. also was there information on the PDF i gave you about a 3D information service? maybe you could make a space for that down one side?

    see what you can do,
    thanks

    • 7 år siden
    1. Lesterp
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 7 år siden

      Just for your information - i think i will extend the contest for a couple of days....that may help

      • 7 år siden
    2. erichcomanoficia
      erichcomanoficia
      • 7 år siden

      I'm back now.. I don't think you should extend it because if you like the design and you want me to finish it you should chose me.

      • 7 år siden
  • Lesterp
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    also there is a bit of a problem with the writing - is there a way of spreading it out more? it just looks like too much clumped together and the audience would probably not want to read it - so if you can break it up more it would look better.
    i also don't like the headings in the coloured boxes running across the page - this doesn't look very professional to me - just standard headings would look better - maybe make them a different colour to black - but don't make it so unprofessional. the tick bullet points beside the services we offer are also not very good looking so use something else there and more professional - also the bullet points on the section above are different - i want both lots to be the same bullet points.

    • 7 år siden
  • Lesterp
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    also there is the picture at the top - can you make this bigger - so that it really hits the viewer and sticks out at them? (should be easier with making the whole page wider) also with the slogan at the top - can you just do it so that it is written over the top of the picture so it stands out (maybe in white) and maybe the first part at the top left, (the power for change is great...) and the second part at the bottom right of the picture. (the power of new workspaces is greater...) - i will also need to be bigger and bolder to stand out more...
    another point maybe the logo at the top left can you remove it from the white box and see what it looks like? i still want it to stand out but not in that white box - also remove that logo further down, it doesn't look very good there.

    • 7 år siden
  • Lesterp
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    Hello,

    The design isn't bad, but there are a few things on it that need to be improved. It doesn't quite look professsional enough. i noticed that you tried to keep it with the style of our website as i said - but i didn't quite mean that, because i don't really like the style of our website with the rounded features etc. i need it clean, crisp and defined - also i think making it wider would help, and combined with the different colours, it looks a bit childish if you know what i mean.
    one improvement that could be made is to make it wider and fit more information/pictures in it but keeping it the same length, because i need to fit some pictures with past projects on it as i suggested. These past projects are important, as the customers really need to see them to see what they are getting. So if you can include these somewhere in a way that keeps the site looking clean and defined.


    see what you can do,
    thanks

    • 7 år siden

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