Freelancer: pratamafadhil
Del:
Anmeld Indlæg

E Khattaba

This is my second entry. A more abstract and simplified version. Thanks

Konkurrenceindlæg #44 for E-Khattaba Logo

Offentlig Præciserings Opslagstavle

  • mohammedhaddad88
    mohammedhaddad88
    • 2 år siden

    show time

    • 2 år siden
  • LaCynn
    LaCynn
    • 3 år siden

    NICE!

    • 3 år siden
  • popohouse15
    popohouse15
    • 3 år siden

    very excellent logo

    • 3 år siden
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 år siden

    Hi, I've uploaded the revised version at entry #80 .

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I like the contrast in face size of the man's and woman's. I like that they are asymmetrical, not identical, and not a reflection.

    • 4 år siden
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 år siden

    Sure, right away.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I like how you filled the gap between the man's chin and woman's nose with a beard. So useful and very well utilized. However, I am not a fan of the negative space under the woman's chin. Would you experiment with that please or just close it up or minimize it. Thanks

    • 4 år siden
  • pratamafadhil
    pratamafadhil
    • 4 år siden

    Thank you four the insight. i will get back to you right away.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    Try using the same mustache for the woman's lips. Change color and reflect (upside-down). Try slightly bigger eyes for both without eyelash for woman. This is also a characteristic of Arabian eyes. Try again a closed eye for the womanonly, this time with eyelash. I like the idea of the blush for the woman but not so much the execution (the blur). It is not in harmony with the whole style. I like the shadow of the ear and chin.

    • 4 år siden
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 4 år siden

      I believe closed eyes will successfully communicate a forehead kiss and support the current position of the man over the woman. Check entry #47 for reference.

      • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I love the color scheme.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I'm very happy.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    Try to experiment with the gold headpiece for the woman. It would add more cultural context. Try to unify all gold stroke thickness including the black headpiece for the man (one thickness). Thank you.

    • 4 år siden
    1. saraalmudhaf
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 4 år siden

      Entries #47 #36

      • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I like the digital pattern design. Works very well with e- as in digital or electronic.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I can see a heart (right one). I like it.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    I love it.

    • 4 år siden
  • saraalmudhaf
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 4 år siden

    This is so far my very best! Thank you.

    • 4 år siden

Vis flere kommentarer Behandler...