Offentlig Præciserings Opslagstavle
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r3n311
- 10 år siden
I change the expressions etc, its just a few tweak away =)
- 10 år siden
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Konkurrenceafholder - 10 år siden
I quite like the blue. And the ellow is good for one of the headlines. But the other headline should be in a different colour. Maybe even in different font. The Headline 'Weight For Me' is the name of the website. 'Never Say Diet!' is a sub-head. A shout of defiance that embodies the spirit of the website. We don't sell diets. Diets don't even work. Most of the visitors to the site have tried every diet. And they are still desperate. Fads and diets don't work for these people. Real changes to thinking and getting help from others who understand them, works for them. So Weweight For me is the name and more formal. Never Say Diet! is strong and funny.
- 10 år siden
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Konkurrenceafholder - 10 år siden
This is very good. There is fun here. But expressions are wrong. He is suspicious. She is coy. He should be fun, charming, a bit naughty, She should be wise, fun. and attractive. They are both caring. Caring for the visitor to the site. Like trusted friends. Like you have found a home where you can overcome your problems. Problems about being overweight. Problem you have had to struggle with alone. Problem that these people, Dr Rhonda and Paul G, and the other members of the site, can understand and can help you overcome.
- 10 år siden
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r3n311
- 10 år siden
i can still edit the dimensions and bit of the colors.
- 10 år siden
