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Freedom

Here the article, I use the self freedom, I'm sorry for that, I just write without checking, because of the time, But This article give the reader awareness about his freedom, tell me if it's will work and need only some changes of effect, Let me now.

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  • joejarvis
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 10 måneder siden

    I like the sentiment but it is a little too choppy. I think if the ideas were a bit more developed, and with more editing, it could great. Thank you for the submission!

    • 10 måneder siden
  • shaikharjb
    shaikharjb
    • 11 måneder siden

    Give a comment, I want to hear from you what you think, it's important to me

    • 11 måneder siden