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Entry 01

Dear sir, I'd like to submit my first entry. I've done two slightly different layouts of the ad. I've totally focused on VA loans since you have not mentioned that the other loan schemes should be mentioned. Any changes for this can be done. Your rating and feedback will be highly valuable. Thank you.


                                                                                                            Konkurrenceindlæg #                                        8
                                     for                                         Design an Advertisement for a mortgage company.

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  • cmballew
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    They like the version better with the "24/7 online application" separated from the bullet block. Feedback from client below.

    - please update the headline to read "FOR THOSE WHO KEEP US SAFE"
    - please make headline red and white font...no blue
    - Replace bullet points with the following...
    - Federally guaranteed loan
    - 100% financing
    - No down payment
    - Qualification process is easier than a conventional loan
    - (in bold) "You helped save our home, so let us help you with yours"

    Please also see updates to project.

    • 7 år siden
    1. blackd51th
      blackd51th
      • 7 år siden

      Dear sir, once again thank you very much for the update and the heads up. I'm at work right now and to be honest I wont be able to do the changes for sometime. I hope that you will wait for me to get this done. I will get the revisions done ASAP. Thank you very much once again.

      • 7 år siden
    2. blackd51th
      blackd51th
      • 7 år siden

      Dear sir, almost done with the revisions. I'll resubmit within the next 15 mins. Thank you.

      • 7 år siden
  • cmballew
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 7 år siden

    I like the concept. I am forwarding to client. There is a possibility they may feel like it has too many words but I will get back with you and let you know.

    • 7 år siden
    1. blackd51th
      blackd51th
      • 7 år siden

      Dear sir, thank you very much for the rating and the feedback. The content of the ad was taken from http://www.imgloans.net/loan-programs. I just revised it to be in point form. Any changes on for this ads can be done. I would be happy to revise the ad as per your and your client's requirements. Please ask your client if they can provide the content if they are feeling that the current copy is too much. Once again thank you very much for the comments and hoping to hear from you soon.

      • 7 år siden
    2. cmballew
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 7 år siden

      Just to be up front....it is between yours and one other. The sooner I can get the revision I can resubmit and hope to award someone the contest soon. Thanks!

      • 7 år siden

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