This is phenomenal. My decision is between yours and one other. 2 critiques - The font should portray more "high tech" and the crosshairs make the logo a bit too busy; if they can be made a bit thinner and vary in width like this: https://www.google.com/search?biw=3127&bih=1164&tbm=isch&sa=1&ei=5mvPXLPfI5OM8APk8oqYBA&q=sniper+scope&oq=sniper+scope&gs_l=img.3..35i39j0i67j0l6j0i67j0.4706.4706..4954...0.0..0.43.43.1......1....1..gws-wiz-img.JqOHyre0pPw#imgrc=hYaEchWAIEU1MM:
You'd be shortlisted down to 1/2. I've asked the other party to submit a mockup of a header, and the decision will come down to the draft of the header.