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ENTRY 2

This is my 2nd entry.. 2 min.. please watch till the end and give your feedback.. if there are any changes required please let me know . Hope you like it.

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  • abinandhabi
    abinandhabi
    • 10 måneder siden

    New Update

    • 10 måneder siden
    1. abinandhabi
      abinandhabi
      • 10 måneder siden

      https://drive.google.com/file/d/1osMkM8GU2J3lGUp36aH8PSGuvn00Pyu1/view?usp=sharing

      • 10 måneder siden
  • abinandhabi
    abinandhabi
    • 10 måneder siden

    Please find my update in this drive link https://drive.google.com/file/d/1omokXNutNERaUDIgSvICfrqwEjMQs66D/view?usp=sharing

    Waiting for your feedback

    • 10 måneder siden
    1. mostpop
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 10 måneder siden

      7) on 0:36 the stars doesnt work put the word "New Discovery" above the light bulb and remove the stars i dont think we need the stars

      8) on 0:40 when they mention prinstion you have to put prinston the grpahics and the voice is off a little

      9) on 0:44 medical breakthorugh should be in blue

      10) on 0:46 erase that guy and erase the white board instead just put the word
      The beginning..

      11) on 0:99 do this https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bLR3YJZ7_nKNZ-MGiZTf90qVe_-1SrFo/view?usp=drivesdk

      12) on 1:19 https://drive.google.com/file/d/1iZ9MvjjqhJQ-lr8Nm-bSOWULiJhO3HBr/view?usp=drivesdk

      13) on 1:30 do this https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lKfJBB4Gayc-ToetwJnzp_db-IV5pL_H/view?usp=drivesdk

      14) on 1:56 put the word Permanent Spin, Disc & Nerve Complications under the pictures

      please finish asap. you are doing great we have alot of work so please finish asap.

      • 10 måneder siden
    2. mostpop
      Konkurrenceafholder
      • 10 måneder siden

      PLEASE DO ASAP you are oding great

      • 10 måneder siden
  • mostpop
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 10 måneder siden

    6) on 0:47 dont show the massage chair yet. https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HxiProrKyGhTABWkvpfNE-dYHY6Wi5L2/view?usp=drivesdk

    7) on 1:13 show the logo for National institute of Health

    8) on 1:19 show 8 red people and 2 green people and dont make it go back and forth just make it static and make it all red and then 2 green people

    9) on 1:40 change the word National Issue to National Crisis

    10) on 2;02 show the logo for the lazer spine institute

    • 10 måneder siden
    1. abinandhabi
      abinandhabi
      • 10 måneder siden

      Thanks for your feedback.. working on yours suggestions.. will upload the corrected entry soon..

      • 10 måneder siden
    2. abinandhabi
      abinandhabi
      • 10 måneder siden

      Please find my update in this drive link https://drive.google.com/file/d/1omokXNutNERaUDIgSvICfrqwEjMQs66D/view?usp=sharing
      Waiting for your feedback

      • 10 måneder siden
  • mostpop
    Konkurrenceafholder
    • 10 måneder siden

    1) do this https://drive.google.com/file/d/12o_tPi11BWYhi3H18uZEhxdbA3Fb1x6C/view?usp=drivesdk do this https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xH9Cs16kGjZMrKmHbnnrea9E2ff2ruAY/view?usp=drivesdk

    2) on 0:11 do not show the massage chair yet, show something that has lots of scientist crowding around something looking at a new invention so everyone is trying to look at it, or put the word New Invention. so people know

    3) on 0:17 those icons dont look good change that to something else

    4) on 0:31 change the word REALLY to Too good to be true!

    5) on 0:36 dont show the massage chair i dont want people to know it is a massage chair until the middle so dont show that yet.. show a lot of pople .

    • 10 måneder siden
  • abinandhabi
    abinandhabi
    • 11 måneder siden

    Waiting for your feedback to continue....and I am hoping that you will like it.. and if you have any suggestions I can change it.. but please leave a feedback.

    • 11 måneder siden

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