Hi, I really like your vision, I have only 2 comments, the water spout is a blowhole, where the water explodes in a mass, not like a sprinkler. See this video of 1 of the 2 actual blowholes in Kiama https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tIoQl4Uovlk. the other comment is I'd like the background to be lighter, like the example video. Otherwise this is a great entry!!